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School started Nd I give up on the forum. Sorry to all that enjoyed it for the time it was on. But with the lack of activity there is no point on me trying Anymore. Let's see what happens when school ends I might start inviding a bunch of people. Oh if your a a guest or anyone you can email me but you need to become a memeber to do so. I c. Make graphics art on my computer for you, watevr you like.
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Join date : 2009-07-01
Age : 26
Location : in the mist

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Character Bio: I am the protector of earth.I am the one that strikes fear in the hearts of evil.I am allie to good nightmare to evil.I am a super human!

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PostSubject: My cure   My cure Icon_minitimeThu Jul 30, 2009 10:30 am

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One bad experiment gone wrong
One towering rage that makes me strong
My rage releasing my other side
that could easily turn the tide
Shall I see the girl that I love
Shall I find the cure and be with my dove
but yet I have not found the cure
or possibly the cure was there I'm sure
it is her.



I don't think this is a good poem I have made.
I just made it as I went along.I didn't even know what to call it.

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Noble and true, you are the hero other heroes aspire to be. You are a natural leader, selfless and kind, who will put the lives of others above your own, and are steadfast in your pursuit of justice.
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Join date : 2009-07-05
Age : 26
Location : USA

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Character Bio: Art of healing.

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PostSubject: Re: My cure   My cure Icon_minitimeThu Jul 30, 2009 3:09 pm

It's good, actually.
Except I think you could've chosen better...lines to use.

"..that could easily turn the tide"

and

"Shall I find the cure and be with my dove"

I think could've been written differently to make the poem even better.

My opinion ^^

Good job.

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PostSubject: Re: My cure   My cure Icon_minitimeSun Aug 02, 2009 6:29 pm

That was a very sweet! You did a great job ^_^.
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Character Bio: I am the protector of earth.I am the one that strikes fear in the hearts of evil.I am allie to good nightmare to evil.I am a super human!

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PostSubject: Re: My cure   My cure Icon_minitimeSun Aug 02, 2009 6:33 pm

I didn't think it was that great it is nice to hear it was thank you!

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Age : 21
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PostSubject: Re: My cure   My cure Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 1:58 am

nice very smooth Very Happy
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